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Azura Fire Emblem WIP by epicbubble7 Azura Fire Emblem WIP by epicbubble7
Still trying to perfect my style but so far I really like my style.
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4-dimensional Featured By Owner Feb 8, 2017  Student Digital Artist
I like this drawing, it is overall pleasing to the eye and i see a lot of potential. I do have to note a few things: 
-Starting with the face, I can't seem to tell if it is supposed to be 3/4th view or looking straight on. The general shape of the head implies it being turned away from the viewer(3/4th view, or some obscure fraction). However the way the eyes and nose are positioned it implies the character is looking straight ahead at the viewer. The lips are, while not quite matching the overall style, not in line with the nose and are more turned away from the viewer than any other features.
-The body is straight forward, in front of the viewer. There is no indication of muscle turning in the neck. And i would like to point out that the boobs(can i say that? should i just say "breasts"?) are a little too low on the chest, and aren't in proportion to the shoulder and armpit.

However, don't feel discouraged! EVERY artist makes these mistakes at some point, I know i did(and still do sometimes, anatomy is hard). It is a very nice piece, and i hope you keep working and improving! I like looking at video game models(especially final fantasy) for anatomy, and even just pictures of human skeletons(not as creepy as it sounds) and muscle diagrams.

And if this does make you mad or you feel attacked, you would be happy to know i was chewing gum and bit my cheek while writing this. It still hurts. 
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epicbubble7 Featured By Owner Feb 8, 2017
Thank you for the improvement ideas I agree with it all. I'm not a mad at the comment so don't worry. I'm not very good at drawing bodies so I'm aiming to improve on that and yeah looking at the face I see what you mean. Hopefully your cheek is okay though it really hurts when you bit it.
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4-dimensional Featured By Owner Feb 8, 2017  Student Digital Artist
:) We all start from somewhere, so don't ever give up! ^_^ (yes it is fine, i am just a wimp lol)
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epicbubble7 Featured By Owner Feb 8, 2017
Yep we all start from scribbles and slowly work our way up others are faster than others (don't even know where that came from) and same I'm pretty wimpish from time to time in real life
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4-dimensional Featured By Owner Feb 8, 2017  Student Digital Artist
ok so i also forgot to say your profile picture is bomb af 707 defender of justice is my bb
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epicbubble7 Featured By Owner Feb 8, 2017
Thank you. 707 is just amazing. Did you see chertizu added the valentine chats now as well but it's not on IOS yet.
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4-dimensional Featured By Owner Feb 8, 2017  Student Digital Artist
YESSS oh my 
//still waiting for V and Saeran route come on cheritzu 
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epicbubble7 Featured By Owner Feb 8, 2017
I really want saerans route glad they added it in the Christmas one at least but they should it to the valentine chats. Then again V's would be pretty cool as well. Same here still waiting for it too.
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February 8, 2017
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